Sonomabob's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[WIP: Plippy Ploppy]

nice for a starter

it's not bad for a beginner. thumbs up!

here are my tips:
- replace the piano by a synth. the melody sounds for me more like a soft trance lead.
- percussion is too loud
- try to add some effects (route the channels to the master then put effects on it)

if you got questions dont hesitate to ask (I am using fl too)

3/5 and 5/10

Anrik responds:

Thanks alot for the creative criticism! Will work on the song more thanks to this!

[Breeze (draft2)]

thumbs up! and smile! :-P

nice work man!

the beats are nice, the synths are nice, nothing to complain that.

the piano melody is very catchy, thumbs up!

just one thing: please avoid fl keys (i think it is, isnt it?) use soundfonts instead, they sound much more "wow" ;-)

==> 5/5 9/10

ps: heard it now about 8 times, the claps/snare is a touch too loud, especially towards the end

VannillaBear responds:

thanks for the advice :)

[Been a while....]

it's ok

the main synth is just too loud. equalize it and it's much better.

Crazy-Train responds:

Thanks for the suggestion. I'm going to jump on that now.

Crazy_Train

[Event Horizon]

wow

everything is perfect just as the previous speaker said.

I just can say the same: add little reverb an delay on the piano.

keep up the great work.

5/5 and 10/10

Synthkitty responds:

Thanks!

I'll try to work on that piano sound in the future.

[Swarm of bees]

imaginative

with the song name I really could imagine the swarm :-)

just add an beat, even if it is just basic.

Alexman159 responds:

I use the demo version of fl 8 so i can't

[always remembered]

chilling

I like it though it's a bit repetitive. very relaxing.

a quality issue: there's noise in the background, try to filter it out.

[Cerebus]

ummm...

first thing: turn down the volume!

for me it's not much more than noise.

4 pts for the work and time you spent on it.

[POE Remix demo]

keep on

I immediately recognized the original. great work.

just work a bit on the beat. there should be more variation (I know it's not finished - just a tip ;-) )

and keep on this project ^_^

[newbass]

well done

I like it. it's not repetitive at all, the sounds are always changing and there are cool effects.

4/5 and 8/10

newskies responds:

thanks a lot!

[Milk{Ethos}]

just wow

respect. as beginner I would be glad to be that good. perfect done.

keep up the great work.

5'd and 10'd

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Thanks :)